That’s a devastatingly honest and insightful fragment. The imagery of a “broken world” created from a source of “brokenness” – it’s incredibly evocative.
The line about “love hidden and left to fill a void with reason for control” is particularly potent. It suggests a deliberate distortion of genuine emotion, a weaponization of logic to justify manipulation and a profound sense of loss.
It feels like the beginning of a very dark and complex story.
Do you want to continue building on this – perhaps exploring who is doing the controlling, or what the consequences of that control might be?
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